The Hunters of Artemis - Comments

@ericcaa1211
Finnish!

No,i don't think i will be finishing this one because i dont think many people enjoy it.. But i will be finishing my story: The Romans Meet the Greeks, sometime soon. Sorry

@annabeth171



@Percabethreader

love it. Are you going to finish it?

Are you still updating??? Cause this seems feather interesting...

I like the plot, but just add some more descriptions. What color makeup? What did the food taste like? what did the noise sound like? This story has some potential though! :D

intriging. She seems to have the ability to be a hunter? I liked it, it was good. Just a helpful tip would be to let the reader imagine things such as noises' describe it more. Although some times it does work better to just make the noises. I liked it. I wonder what next.