There Will Always Be Demigods - Comments

When will you update this?!

Chapter 10: No not Bailey!! ;o; I like the new power Theo has!!

@AandB
Okay, great. Hope you did well :)

@piedpeterpan
I'm sorry I've had exams so I've been spending my time revising but they are over now so the next part should be up soon. :)

Where you at? I REALLY WANT THIS STORY TO CONTINUE!

I just.. I just really love your story... Really much :)

Thoughts on Chapter 7: Wow, great chapter! While I enjoyed it, I do feel as if Tyche was kind of...random? I feel a goddess wouldn't just show up like that, but hey, this isn't my story, it's not me writing it! I seem to notice Bailey is talking a bit more, I like it! Though I feel as if everything is connecting together to...coincidentally? It's hard writing a quest with things that make sense, however, so I have no problem with it. I am curious to know what Emma's coin does, I hope she uses it well...

I love this story, and the characters :) I can't wait 'till you continue. The prophecy was so well made. Good job!

Thoughts on Chapter 6: I love Bailey so much the poor kid! I just want to take him and give him soup and grape juice and just-- ;A; I love him so much. That sounds like a really horrible prophecy, though. Prophecies always get my heart the most because it's like...obvious foreshadowing, but people are probably going to die! I'm curious to know who this Alex guy is, too (though I'm laughing to myself because my own Dionysus boy is named Alex). He seems to be a son of Hades? Someone worse? Not sure, but I can't wait to find out!

Thoughts on Chapter 5: Wow! Wow, poor Theo. :c Such a sad thing to happen to such a neat boy, shame his family had to die. I'm a little concerned about how violent Emma is being over a prophecy, however. Then again, children of Athena are always so curious! Hopefully she'll stop beating up Bailey soon, he's my favorite, haha.

Thoughts on Chapter 4: Very interesting! Gosh I feel real sorry for Bailey, poor lad. I'm definitely glad Theo was okay, though! Good on you Emma for managing to get him safe! I feel that a little more detail could have been used, such as describing the house they were in and such. You seem to get the general introduction of the characters and ignore description after that, but it's easy enough to follow. Good job on this chapter!

Thoughts on Chapter 3: Hot damn, you stinkin half-bloods, have we not learned from Percy to not go into strange looking houses at night when the lights randomly turn on? I'm really hoping now that Theo is okay. :c I don't think Lamia could have eaten him that fast, but it's still worrisome! Your chapters seem a little rushed here and there, but it's still a good pace nonetheless for your style.

Thoughts on Chapter 2: It is a little confusing at times. Perhaps you could add a little more description to the world around them? I'm not talking too many, more like a few sentences here and there to give us a general idea of where they are. I personally just kind of guessed they were in a forest from what I read in the previous chapter. There's a few runons, but I got the gist of it. I really like Theo, he seems like a pretty neat guy! I wonder how he got that quiver-- was it just a gift from his dad in general, or did he work for it? I'm curious to know what Bailey did, and I hope Emma's okay. D:

Thoughts on Chapter 1: I like it! Introductions were nice and snappy and Emma seems like a pretty nice girl, as does Theo. I love Bailey, too! I love all children of Dionysus. '';u; One thing I would suggest with your dialogue is that you use "quotations" instead of apostrophes. If there is an action like 'he/she/it said' after the dialogue, use a comma instead of a period. Like this: /'Agreed' Theo said./ to /"Agreed," Theo said./ All in all, I like it so far! Can't wait to read more about them.