Mystery Girl Again - Comments

@Carmine Fontis
Worse than primary when it comes to proper language.

@ThisIsHowIRoll

Sorry, I was ranking 'bitch' as more offensive than 'shit'; what's the point in saying middle school is worse than primary? It's not a competition.

@Carmine Fontis
How about 'shit'? And primary school? You mean like, elementary? Middle school's a lot worse, though.

@ThisIsHowIRoll

I've looked, the next rating available is M! The most offensive swearword written is 'bitch' and I don't know about you but when I was in primary school me and my friends said A LOT worse.

@Carmine Fontis
A child would be up to around ten years old. And I know some kids who come on here. I'm not saying you should rate it M, but something more than PG.

@ThisIsHowIRoll

I'm not trying to be argumentative, but if children are on the internet without perental supervision (I never had any supervision) then they are going to read things regardless of rating. There is nothing explicitly sexual nor any themes that could disturb children in this story, so I will NOT mislabel it as M. I would like to know your definition of child, though, to be more clear.

@Carmine Fontis
Yes, but you have to realize that this is a website, not TV. And I don't think that PG television shows would have explicit swearing.

@ThisIsHowIRoll

Sorry, I thought PG would cover swearing - it does in TV mostly.

Okay, this is not PG. PG means that kids can read this stuff, sometimes with parental guidance. Also, PG means NO SWEARING. So I suggest that you change your story's rating.

Good story!I'd love to read more!