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Just a little story - Comments

@Morningstar.
Yes :) I'm very happy!

Protaokper Protaokper
5/25/15

SHIT CRAP DELETE THIS NOW IT HURTS MY MOTHERFUCKING BRAIN B/C ITS SO BAD

HAPPY NOW FUCKFACE?

Omg me and my friend laughed at the OOOOHHHHH SHIZZZZ NUTSSSS!!!! Lol! I love the twist!!

Constrictor Constrictor
9/24/14

I was planning it from the start:)

@gwolfie

Protaokper Protaokper
9/24/14

I thought he would be a son of zues. That was a twist.

gwolfie gwolfie
9/24/14

I'll try. I'll edit maybe too. Sorry, I really didn't notice.

Protaokper Protaokper
9/17/14

Just a little (no pun intended) suggestion: Use a LOT less hyphens...pwease?

ThisIsHowIRoll ThisIsHowIRoll
9/17/14

Hello everybody!
Again:surprise. This story got more than 100 extra views while I was at school.
Just wow.

Protaokper Protaokper
9/16/14

Hello everybody!
I just want to say I'm surprised at how popular this story has become. I started this 2 days ago, and so far, it's number 1 on page four of the popular stories list, and it has 200 views?! Thank you, everybody.

Protaokper Protaokper
9/16/14

What would you like next to happen?

Protaokper Protaokper
9/15/14

@Burning Sun
No problem!

Constrictor Constrictor
9/15/14

@Music4life
Thank you!

Protaokper Protaokper
9/15/14

Your an amazing writer!

Constrictor Constrictor
9/15/14

@The Bright One
@Music4life
Thank you! I will update presently!

Protaokper Protaokper
9/14/14

I like it! :) Keep writing!

The Bright One The Bright One
9/14/14

Really cool, descriptive start! I'm looking forward to more!

Constrictor Constrictor
9/14/14