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Crystalline Melodies I: Undying Strains - Comments
I would so buy your books if you got them published...not even kidding this is literally my favorite thing.
The story certainly held high expectations with the amazing cover art, the Summary also looked interesting! The thing that threw me off was all the characters. I have ADHD and it's hard for me to keep track of stuff, and sixteen characters just get jumbled around inside my head. ALSO, the updates are chopped up and not consistent, so when you do update the reader forgot where he/she left off and must re-read the entire thing. I'm not trying to be rude though, I love your writing, it's very intriguing and you have a good story line going. The thing is: you haven't updated in three months and that is a very long time BTW. Sorry for the rant, I actually love your story!
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@Lucas Fane
You can insult me if you like, but please DON'T insult readers. I appreciate all opinions, positive or negative, so it's fine for you to think it's bad. You're entitled to yours. But if you won't specify WHY you dislike it or give constructive criticism, then please keep your pessimism to yourself, especially if you are going to pick at my friends.
Also, you failed to spell "shittiest" and "slut" correctly. If you're going to criticize, please do it properly.
This is the shittest story I've ever read. Anyone who reads it is a shit head and the author is a dirty sout for making this. Horrible story. Worst. YUCK.
@Hades Spawn
Hm, well, first, she was actually mislabeled (typo), now I realize, and second, she behaves like an INTx, and third, it was a hellhound, monster not dog. Self-defense, not murder. (sort of...)
@MorningStar
TOTALLY. Well, I'm hoping context will help people to know I am not going full on sci-fi here. XD
I mean, Athenian, Aphroditian, Martian. Logic, right? x)
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