Unbreakable - Comments

@Chelsea_Delos
Omg thanks!!

Omg! I absolutely love this!

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@Protaokper
Pretty much lol

what the fock

Gaea's a bitch

Continue story!!

@Zalder
Nice

Update.

@SadieKane
It's a mystery!!

@Mori volo
Nice but oh my gods that is just *crying* so * more crying* were are the girls!!!!

@Mori volo
Nice but oh my gods that is just *crying* so * more crying* were are the girls!!!!

@Mori volo
Nice :)

@BurningSun
Yeah, I try... ;)

This sucks for me to read...this really is torture.

@SadieKane
I will! Thanks!

I like it. It may depress me and make me want to kill all thought stupid monsters but I love it and I am not sure why. Keep going

@Stop it Rick
Thank you! It takes place in a battle against Gaea.

This is the same as my chapter length as well, but I like the idea! Some of it was a tiny bit confusing at the beginning, and I couldn't tell where they were, if that makes sense. I really like it, though.

@Percabeth101
I know, I plan to make the main chapters more longer.

That wasn't short at all! Mine is much shorter.