Curse of the Love Scrolls - Comments

It's good and I could co author too

@Annabeth'sMyOtherSister
Thanks! :)

Ok!


@the_fourth_fate

I'll co-author! I have some ideas....

Neat new chapter keep it up

THANK YOU!!!! @BurningSun @SadieKane @Jennifer Sophie Merlia Zheng

Ooh nice plot

AWSOME AND PLZ UPDATE!!

wow......I love it

@Annabeth'sMyOtherSister
you are welcom

@SadieKane

Thanks! I'm glad you like it!

@Constrictor

Okay, I will try to slow down.

I like it keep going

Very intriguing first chapter! I am definetly interested by the theme. I do however recommend slowing your pace. Sometimes you've got awesome ideas, sort of like mountains. But to get from mountain to mountain, you need a bridge. Think of your little details as the bridges. Other then adding more details, I really like where the story is going. Definitely a good read!