Seconds after - Comments

Woah.. sorry. That was not planned. :(

I think I am probably the only one that noticed this but I liked it... the part in chapter 1, "the world may never know" it was from that tootsie pop commercial with the owl and I thought it was funny cuz annabeth said it lol athena ha

I think I am probably the only one that noticed this but I liked it... the part in chapter 1, "the world may never know" it was from that tootsie pop commercial with the owl and I thought it was funny cuz annabeth said it lol athena ha

I think I am probably the only one that noticed this but I liked it... the part in chapter 1, "the world may never know" it was from that tootsie pop commercial with the owl and I thought it was funny cuz annabeth said it lol athena ha

I think I am probably the only one that noticed this but I liked it... the part in chapter 1, "the world may never know" it was from that tootsie pop commercial with the owl and I thought it was funny cuz annabeth said it lol athena ha

I think I am probably the only one that noticed this but I liked it... the part in chapter 1, "the world may never know" it was from that tootsie pop commercial with the owl and I thought it was funny cuz annabeth said it lol athena ha

I think I am probably the only one that noticed this but I liked it... the part in chapter 1, "the world may never know" it was from that tootsie pop commercial with the owl and I thought it was funny cuz annabeth said it lol athena ha

I think I am probably the only one that noticed this but I liked it... the part in chapter 1, "the world may never know" it was from that tootsie pop commercial with the owl and I thought it was funny cuz annabeth said it lol athena ha

Please leave comments, suggestions and advice- I want to hear your opinion please ( it's my first story)

@Striderbro
Thank you so much I will continue whenever possible

Awwww! Keep writing, I like this