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The journey to the forgotten temple - Comments

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This is dumb

Poppy Dill Poppy Dill
6/6/15

First off can I just say your story is awesome. Second I'm just going to give a little bit of criticism to make it better. You should ad quotation marks just so people cpcan tell the difference between talking and personal thoughts. Other than you did great!!!

KandyKid11 KandyKid11
5/21/15

Horrible

Constrictor Constrictor
5/21/15

Crap

FuckYouThunderYouCanSuckMyDick FuckYouThunderYouCanSuckMyDick
5/21/15

Cool I'm also writing my first fan fiction its called When Kids Come to Camp. I'm homeschooled and really should be doing homework but fan fiction is way too awesome. Any how I'm going to finish this and get back to my hom

KandyKid11 KandyKid11
5/20/15

I voted a 10!

Chelsea_Delos Chelsea_Delos
5/5/15

This looks REALLY good!

Chelsea_Delos Chelsea_Delos
5/4/15