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UPDAAAATE!!!!! DO IT RIGHT NOW!!!!!!!!!!Y ARE YOU STILL READING THIS?!?!?!?! U COULD BE WRITING!!!!!! UPDAAAAAAATE!!!!!!

This is a cute story so far! Peyton sounds like a super model, and I like her conviction. He is obviously not afraid to do what's right, and has a good head on her shoulders. Also I like how tall she is, because as a tall girl, I know firsthand that it can make you feel awkward, but she really owns it, which suggests that she has a refreshing dose of confidence. So far so good!

Keep it up its amazing

There is a reason she is "too perfect", and not everyone is "swooning" over them. thanks for the feedback though.
@persassy1011

I think the characters are just too perfect. Like the whole no acne, and everyone swoons over them. I also think the story is moving too fast, almost like your rushing it. You should add more detail.

Good Story! I love it

I like the story so far. It has promise.

I like the characters.