Revenge For Those Who Fell - Comments

Yay

@Major Blood
Allgood

I love this!

@Sis of Leo valdez

Thank you for support it means alot.

i have so much support for u keep on going yay yay yay

@Major Blood
Dragons i love dragons you have my suport all the way

omg yay shes alive wooh

omg yay shes alive wooh

@Major Blood
ohhhhhhh love it

@Bubba boy
My comma key is broken at the moment thanks for the input. The reason it's more of a fire power is smoke would be underwhelming if fighting monsters/Demi-gods.

I like this story idea, I love the infamous series. Although, one thing I noticed was that Delsin has fire powers. I remember that Cole had power over fire if you made evil decisions throughout his games, I`m pretty sure Delson`s closest thing to fire was smoke. Might I also say you might want to add more comma`s, it makes it look a little cleaner. But, like I said, great concept. Keep writting.

*gives cookie* Congrats!

Infamous second son?

I really like this but Annabeth whyyyy!!!!!