The (mis)adventures of David Banner - Comments

I'm tenastic, deal with it bro!

Love it

~future~

Great Writing !!! :)
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@Chelsea_Delos
Well thank you, I quite like it myself.

@missie-mouse
Yes, I've always had trouble righting in 3rd but I think I've been doing great with it so far :)

I love this!

This is a funny story! Dave is just cocky enough to the point that I like him, but even he second guesses himself, evidenced by the quip where he asked his sword not to 'slice his back open'. You've already developed a really nice three dimensional character here!

Chelsea_Delos is a cover designer. Look her up, she's really nice.

I love the cover! How did you make it?

Nice! It's pretty cool!

Do you need a beta reader?
No offense intended.