This is so good, it may as well be the only reason I'm back! Seriously, it is so well written, even if it is a huge chunk for a first chapter. Love it, though. The part with Michael getting offended by being just Irish even if he's from Northern Ireland is great and so true. Also, every time I read your work I get envious of your skill. Seriously, it's like you write gold.
This is really good! I love the idea and the how characters are forming, I can't wait to read more! There is just one thing though, it was a heck of a lot to take in over one chapter
This is so good, it may as well be the only reason I'm back! Seriously, it is so well written, even if it is a huge chunk for a first chapter. Love it, though. The part with Michael getting offended by being just Irish even if he's from Northern Ireland is great and so true. Also, every time I read your work I get envious of your skill. Seriously, it's like you write gold.
4/30/17