Finding Love - Comments

@mikciemouse9
The first one is always the scariest yet it'll be your favorite, even if no one else likes it. Don't give up on this even if no one really likes it or people bash it. I ended up deleting my first one and I regret it because it's still one of my favorite things I ever wrote. This site is good for practice.

@Frost Wrathbomber
This is my first fanfiction and I was nervous it was gonna suck really bad. So thanks for letting me know how to make it better.

One suggestion, would be put more detail into each chapter. The first one went by really fast and it didn't really grab me. If you put more detail into your writing it'll be much better. Good idea though.