Is this real?
7
When I got to camp. Everyone was quiet. It felt wrong. Percy ran up to me with a sad look on his face.
"Jess, Beckendorf died today." Then Percy started to cry. I knew today was he and Beck were going to attack Luke's ship. I held him. He wiped his eyes. "We need to head towards the Big House for a meeting with head of the cabins." Walked down. I left my stuff on the couch and walked into the Ping Pong room that we use for meetings. I saw Silena looking somber over her cup of hot coca. I sat down next to Percy. Chiron began with the meeting.
"Okay Percy it time for you to hear the the Great Prophecy." Percy left. I could feel tension in the air. Percy came back looking really pale. "Percy please read the the Great Prophecy aloud." Percy began:
A half-blood of the eldest godsshall reach sixteen against all oddsAnd see the world in endless sleepThe hero's soul, cursed blade shall reapA single choice shall end his daysOlympus to preserve or raze
"Chiron what does the line mean when Olympus to preserve or raise?" Asked one of the Strolls brothers.
"It Raze. It means to destroy or take down." Annabeth said from her seat.
"We have a bigger issue then this. We have a spy here." Conner said. Silena started to cry. Clarssie put her arm around Silena. Trying to comfort her.
"Well you guys aren't getting help from the Ares cabin until those Apollo guys give back our item." I was confuse. Percy looked confuse too.
"No way. We lead the treat we get it." Ryan said. He looked angry. I hide my face.
"Fine then. I'm sorry Chiron. My brothers and sisters are not going to help with this war." She through a knife in the table and left.
"What are we going to do now Chiron. We lost our best way of winning." Annabeth said.
"I don't know Annabeth. Since none of the gods are here we have to do this on our own." He dismissed us. I grab my things and headed to my cabin. I set my things on my bed and sat down. I put my hands on my head. I was angry. There a spy here. People are going to start fighting with each other. The the Great Prophecy is about Percy then. what is he going to do. I started to cry. Knowing I might lose my brother. I will lose friends. Ryan. I miss him even more. I want him. I was sobbing when someone came in the cabin. They sat on my bed and put their arms around me. They held me. I looked up to find Ryan looking at me.
"I'm here, Jess. I'm so sorry for everything." I held on to him. He pulled me into his lap. I just sat there and cried. I finally stop. "Rough day?" I nodded my head. I looked at hos face. I missed seeing those eyes look at me.
"You wouldn't believe me." I smiled at him. We got up and went for a walk. "It looks like there less kids here."
"There is. Kids having been either going on Luke side or not returning back to came or they died" Ryan looked sad. We walked until we got in front of a giant fight between Ryan siblings and Ares children. "Great." Ryan went off to pull off one of his siblings off a Ares kid. I saw Ares campers shouting in poems. Then a couple of Apollo kids shouting curses at them. I went off to find Percy. I saw him and Nico and Mrs. O'Leary run into a shadow of a tree then disappeared. Great. I rolled my eyes. I went off to get my sword fix. The kids did it without payment. I payed them anyway. I felt really bad. Ryan caught up with me at the dock.
"Hey, why aren't you with Percy?"
"He left with Nico." Ryan nodded his head. We headed off to get some food. Hardly any of house ate. There was a bad feeling going on here. everyone went to bed without complaining. Ryan kissed me good night. I went to bed feeling regret.
"Jess, Beckendorf died today." Then Percy started to cry. I knew today was he and Beck were going to attack Luke's ship. I held him. He wiped his eyes. "We need to head towards the Big House for a meeting with head of the cabins." Walked down. I left my stuff on the couch and walked into the Ping Pong room that we use for meetings. I saw Silena looking somber over her cup of hot coca. I sat down next to Percy. Chiron began with the meeting.
"Okay Percy it time for you to hear the the Great Prophecy." Percy left. I could feel tension in the air. Percy came back looking really pale. "Percy please read the the Great Prophecy aloud." Percy began:
A half-blood of the eldest godsshall reach sixteen against all oddsAnd see the world in endless sleepThe hero's soul, cursed blade shall reapA single choice shall end his daysOlympus to preserve or raze
"Chiron what does the line mean when Olympus to preserve or raise?" Asked one of the Strolls brothers.
"It Raze. It means to destroy or take down." Annabeth said from her seat.
"We have a bigger issue then this. We have a spy here." Conner said. Silena started to cry. Clarssie put her arm around Silena. Trying to comfort her.
"Well you guys aren't getting help from the Ares cabin until those Apollo guys give back our item." I was confuse. Percy looked confuse too.
"No way. We lead the treat we get it." Ryan said. He looked angry. I hide my face.
"Fine then. I'm sorry Chiron. My brothers and sisters are not going to help with this war." She through a knife in the table and left.
"What are we going to do now Chiron. We lost our best way of winning." Annabeth said.
"I don't know Annabeth. Since none of the gods are here we have to do this on our own." He dismissed us. I grab my things and headed to my cabin. I set my things on my bed and sat down. I put my hands on my head. I was angry. There a spy here. People are going to start fighting with each other. The the Great Prophecy is about Percy then. what is he going to do. I started to cry. Knowing I might lose my brother. I will lose friends. Ryan. I miss him even more. I want him. I was sobbing when someone came in the cabin. They sat on my bed and put their arms around me. They held me. I looked up to find Ryan looking at me.
"I'm here, Jess. I'm so sorry for everything." I held on to him. He pulled me into his lap. I just sat there and cried. I finally stop. "Rough day?" I nodded my head. I looked at hos face. I missed seeing those eyes look at me.
"You wouldn't believe me." I smiled at him. We got up and went for a walk. "It looks like there less kids here."
"There is. Kids having been either going on Luke side or not returning back to came or they died" Ryan looked sad. We walked until we got in front of a giant fight between Ryan siblings and Ares children. "Great." Ryan went off to pull off one of his siblings off a Ares kid. I saw Ares campers shouting in poems. Then a couple of Apollo kids shouting curses at them. I went off to find Percy. I saw him and Nico and Mrs. O'Leary run into a shadow of a tree then disappeared. Great. I rolled my eyes. I went off to get my sword fix. The kids did it without payment. I payed them anyway. I felt really bad. Ryan caught up with me at the dock.
"Hey, why aren't you with Percy?"
"He left with Nico." Ryan nodded his head. We headed off to get some food. Hardly any of house ate. There was a bad feeling going on here. everyone went to bed without complaining. Ryan kissed me good night. I went to bed feeling regret.
(This is a comment on chapter seven) Nothign I'd misspelled, but some sentences just make zero sense or have a typo
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