it's good but i think you should have picked one demi-god and told the war in there eyes and it is short you should have staled the fight longer and in Clarisse and reyna's fight you should have told more about what it felt like or sounded like or even looked like. best of wishes P.S please read my story "Leo gets a girlfriend" by Leo's babe (that's me)
@Hovsep Touloujian
oh sorry
7/6/14