Story Reviews

Okay Thank you for no Spelling or Grammar Mistakes Im really worried when I read a story who has them it would make it harder to read.

BUT no Mistakes in this fanfic.

But when your writing Converstions can you do it
"Like this," Becase it makes just a little easier to read {I took this from a chapter as a example}

“The girl knows her worth,”Poseidon chuckled
“Hephaestus, I would like you to make another Speed Daemon, custom designed to Percy’s liking,” I began.

And then you know the rest keeps going like that. Just a suggetion.


The summary is very detailed and the rest of the fanfic. Which is Great.

I like the storys plot and how well organized this is.

I give this story a 10

Notes

I do recommened reading this fanfic.



~Nisha