Story Reviews
The First Daughter
In this story I was honestly confused for most of the story, like what character she was talking about or what was even happening.
I suggest a little bit of revising and getting another author for peer editing then you will probably get more votes and subscribers, my honest opinion.
I give this story a 5, once you edit it you will see how great it can really be!
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11/10/15