The Life After the Battle

Chapter 4 I just read the very last book in the Heroes of Olympus series. I noticed that a few things were off in this fanfiction, which taught me a lesson. Never try to write a fanfiction of a story you haven't even finished yet. Anywho, that doesn't matter. Let's continue.
(Frank)
You know, you'd think hearing your dad compliment you on a job well done would be great... but you weren't the son of the war god.
As of the moment, I'm sitting here listening to him ramble on about how he was proud of my fighting skills. To be honest, it was weird. Now I'm not saying that for the reason you might think. The reason I thought it was weird is because I'm roman, so I'm used to the Mars version of him talking to me. But right now it's the greek version, Ares.
"I mean. the way that you sliced through that giant. Damn, that was great!" I heard a knock on the door. Apperently Ares didn't, for he just sat there, rambling on. "And the way that you-" I stopped him there.
"Dad, I'm sorry, but is this a 'thanks for helping' or a 'let's do it again'? I mean, don't get me wrong, I'd love to talk to you, but I think an hour and a half is long enough, don't you think?" He nodded in understanding.
"Of course. Until next time." Then he walked out. As he walked out, Hazel walked in.
"Well, I can see from your expression that your 'family bonding' session went great as well." We sat there with serious faces for about 5 seconds before we burst out in laughter. "So, what was your father like? Let me guess. 'You did a great job killing that bastard. I could've done better, but still, great job.'"She mocked.
"And yours, well, let's not talk about Hades please." I said before I sat down on my bed. Before I had a chance to get comfortable, the ship started to rock crazily.
Hazel and I exchanged an understanding glance before running to the top deck. What stood in front of us was shocking, I looked over to Percy and Annabeth.
Annabeth was crying into Percy's shoulder while he just stood there, wide eyed. He whispered something. I guessed it was the name of the creature on this ship. Then Leo came running up, yelling "Who in the Tartarus is messing with my ship. I swear to all the gods I will faceplant him Leo-style!"
Then came Hepheastus himself. "No way. What are you doing up here?" That scared me. Then the creature laughed itself. The laugh was so scary, like all of my fears were laughing in my face at once. I almost turned into a squirrel.
Then came Zeus. I didn't even have to look to know it was him. I could tell by the tingling on the back of my neck, like the air itself was zapping me.
"Tartarus!" He boomed so lound I almost lost hearing. This battle was gonna be hell. Literally.
So, what do you think? I did my best for what ideas I had. I just felt that I had to upload a chapter considering that I haven't in a long while. But now I have internet back, so I should be able to go back to weekly.

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