8 years later
I Jen
"Bye Jaz." I said as I waved, "Good - bye Jen," she called as she treated to Shelby, who'd been badly hurt in Whatever Works, which was taught by Felix. When I got out of my room a few minuites later, I bumped into Felix, "What's the rush?" I asked since he was running, a grin spread across his face, "Carter and Sadie are here!" he happily told me, "Oh," I replied since I'd only met them once, three years ago when I'd came here,"But I thought they only came to meet the new people." "Or to bring them." Excitment washed over me, since I enjoyed new compony and with Shelby out and Felix busy with the other teachers and nobody else at the twenty - first Nome I wouldn't feel alone. I found Carter and Sadie in The Great Room talking to a boy a little taller than me with brown hair and blue eyes, "Hello Jen," Sadie greeted me, "This is Zack. Zack - Jen, Jen - Zack." "Hi," I said grinning, "Jen?" Carter asked, "Will you show Zack around?" "Sure." I grabbed his arm and dragged him to the top of the stairs.
Notes
Sorry 'bout my spelling. I think my other chapters will be longer.
You spelled 'Osiris' wrong in the character.
12/25/14