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Crystalline Melodies I: Undying Strains

Summary

NOTICE: I've moved to Wattpad. Here's the link to the new version of the story if anyone's interested in keeping up with it: https://www.wattpad.com/story/56348462-the-seventh-chance-crystalline-melodies-1

At age seven, everything started going downhill for Krystal. In fact, for a full decade after that, she was subject to one horrific event after another. The fear, terror, and trauma are very real, but the sequence is almost forced...The nagging suspicion in the back of her mind, whilst mysterious, is pushed to the backburner in the face of more prevalent dilemmas.

In the PAST, she must deal with everything from piracy and work camps to poverty, perversion, and a modern day rendition of The Hunger Games.

In the PRESENT, she must deal with the devastating aftereffects of such an upbringing, as well as navigating foreign cultural and social norms, the supernatural abilities she can never again deny having, and the daily challenges and rigors of a demigod life in this new-found Camp Half-Blood. That's pretty much all she has to handle, much to her relief.

That is, until her old life decides now that things are about to settle down is the perfect time to play karma...

In spite of the physical threats brought up by these scenarios, she must be able to outrun her past. She must keep her new friends from finding out who and what she truly is, for her safety and theirs. She must read between the lines and solve the mystery behind the strings of intertwinement that link her to the lives of those around her. She must keep her inner demons at bay if she wants a second chance -- in more than one way -- at life.

Dreaded secrets.
Buried memories.
Love, friendship, and hope...
Denial, despair, loss, pain, betrayal, and death...
The Fates have more in store for Krystal yet.





Rated R: Intense Action Violence, Scenes of Torture, Infrequent Language, and Mature Themes. (Actually just precautionary right now. Nothing here is R yet, but predicted scenes will likely be.)
Genres: Action, Adventure, Romance, Drama, Psychological Thriller, and Tragedy...

Original CoverIT IS HIGHLY RECOMMENDED THAT WHEN READING EACH CHAPTER YOU LISTEN TO THE SUGGESTED SONG ACCOMPANIMENT, AS IT WAS CAREFULLY PICKED TO HELP ADD TO THE MOOD OF THE CHAPTER, AND HELPS A LOT WITH FORESHADOWING AND INVOKING A STRONGER REACTION TO THE MORE EMOTIONAL SECTIO--screw scientific explanations, just listen to the song! =P

If you like this and want to read more about Krystal, check out Crystalline Melodies: One-Shots

If you are interested in reading my original work, feel free to check out Being Human.

NOTE: I just want to put out there that my plan is to write this as a PJO fanfiction first (the world fits my needs best), then rewrite it as an original work and hopefully get it published someday down the road. For that purpose, this may be a lot longer and slower than your average fanfiction, and I'd appreciate it if you wouldn't rate it lower based on that. I'm trying my best to make it sound like an actual novel, because that's what it will (hopefully) one day be. This ALSO means that the flashbacks are going to be written in chronological order, but by the time I've finished all the books, they will likely be rearranged. Thanks! :)

Characters

#01: Krystal Blackwood

#01: Krystal Blackwood

FA Past: 8 years old | FA Present: 17 years old

#02: Nicole Janes

#02: Nicole Janes

FA Present: 16 years old

#03: Aria Blackwood

#03: Aria Blackwood

FA Past: 15 years old | FA Present: 22 years old [deceased?]

#04: Kaitlyn Blackwood

#04: Kaitlyn Blackwood

FA Past: 34 years old | FA Present: 43 years old [deceased?]

#05: Erik "Grandfather" Janes

#05: Erik "Grandfather" Janes

FA Present: 64 years old

#06: Jason Grace

#06: Jason Grace

FA Present: 16 years old

#07: Rājasī

#07: Rājasī

FA Past: 36 years old | FA Present: 45 years old

#08: Esha

#08: Esha

FA Past: 8 years old

#09: Becky

#09: Becky

FA Past: 16

#10: Asa

#10: Asa

FA Past: 10 years old

#11: Jocelyn Darby

#11: Jocelyn Darby

FA Past: 20 years old

#12: Jakeb Khan

#12: Jakeb Khan

FA Past: 36 years old | FA Present: 45 years old

#13: Zeus

#13: Zeus

Immortal

#16: Ares

#16: Ares

Immortal

Chapters

  1. [PAST] I Give Pirates the Electric Chair

    [Update: November 8th] On a "cruise" trip with my family, we get two unexpected surprises: the ship is hijacked, and I apparently have superpowers.

  2. [PRESENT] I Ride The Bucking Bronco Of Death

    [Update: November 14th] Ready for a new life, I finally reach my near decade-long destination. Sadly, my first experience there is not exactly what I was hoping for.

  3. [PAST] The Detriment Of A Broken Mind

    [Update: November 18th] After accidentally killing my mom, Aria and I deal with both the emotional and psychological after-effects as well as the life-threatening situation at hand.

  4. [PRESENT] Mint Flavored Pain-Killer

    [Update: November 22nd] Now even more beat up than when I journeyed here, I meet my first camper, and make my first contact with what I would call "civilized civilization."

  5. [PAST] My Ineptitude For Optimism

    [Update: November 24th] Having only gone through hurried and barely competent consolation sessions, now we are thrust into an Auschwitz-esque environment. Aria and I are separated for the first time of many.

  6. [PRESENT] I, The Derelict Vagrant

    [Update: December 5th] "Apparently, now I can add "the Laughing Stock of Camp Half-Blood" to my list of titles..." My first exposure to normalcy does not go very well. At least I (sort of) make a new friend in the process...

  7. [PAST] Swiss Army...Plantation?

    [Update: December 27th] "The multi-tool for all your slave and black market item trafficking needs." I am integrated into the workforce much faster than I had anticipated. A bad day ends with a silver lining.

  8. [PRESENT] Greased Lightning (Not The Song)

    [Update: February 5th] In an attempt by an Ares kid to humiliate me, he gets it thrown back in his face. By a girl, as I decide is bound time to reveal. But what is the claiming?

  9. [PAST] My Guardian Angel

    [Update: April 20th] Aria is not lost, much to my granted relief. The world is a much darker place than I'd thought. We have an interesting time getting a decent meal, and Aria makes a decision behind the backs of our supervisors.

  10. IMPORTANT

    Good news and bad news!

Comments

We've missed you!!

@theteenagefandom
Aww, that means a lot. <3 :) I've missed you guys!

Torissa Nikole Torissa Nikole
1/17/16

I would so buy your books if you got them published...not even kidding this is literally my favorite thing.

The story certainly held high expectations with the amazing cover art, the Summary also looked interesting! The thing that threw me off was all the characters. I have ADHD and it's hard for me to keep track of stuff, and sixteen characters just get jumbled around inside my head. ALSO, the updates are chopped up and not consistent, so when you do update the reader forgot where he/she left off and must re-read the entire thing. I'm not trying to be rude though, I love your writing, it's very intriguing and you have a good story line going. The thing is: you haven't updated in three months and that is a very long time BTW. Sorry for the rant, I actually love your story!
#SquirrelHugs
Constrictor Constrictor
7/20/15

@Lucas Fane
You can insult me if you like, but please DON'T insult readers. I appreciate all opinions, positive or negative, so it's fine for you to think it's bad. You're entitled to yours. But if you won't specify WHY you dislike it or give constructive criticism, then please keep your pessimism to yourself, especially if you are going to pick at my friends.
Also, you failed to spell "shittiest" and "slut" correctly. If you're going to criticize, please do it properly.

Torissa Nikole Torissa Nikole
4/22/15