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Emmy and the Lightning Thief

Chapter 3

Another chapter from me, WFL2B! Please comment what you think and any suggestions!

Emmy's POV

Luke brought me into the cabin filled with campers wearing orange Camp Half-Blood shirts.I heard that name from my mom weeks earlier saying it was safe and there are others like me there; what ever that meant. All the kids in the cabin stared at me. All of them but a few had the same sandy colored hair Luke. Then there were the kids who sat in the corner of the room on the floor with sleeping bags, who looked nothing like the other kids.

"Hermes or undetermined?" one of the campers asked.

" Undetermined, and be nice," Luke told the camper who asked.

"There are already too many people in this cabin". A lot of campers seemed annoyed to get a new camper in there cabin. It's not like I could help it. Maybe it was the fact that the cabin had almost reached its maximum capacity. There was little to no space between some bunks. Luke walk me to the undetermined corner of the room. There were 5 or 6 kids there in the corner all with their sleeping bags squished next to each other. The undetermined kids looked completely different from everyone else in the cabin. I all ready had a sleeping bag set up and a change of clothes including a orange CHB shirt.

" In a few minutes it will be dinner outside, settle yourself in and get comfortable. OK? I'll see you at dinner,"after Luke said that he walked back to the Big House.

Luke's POV

~In The Big House~

I walked to the Big House to discuss what happened today. I want to know if maybe Chiron had any clue who the mystery girl Hailey godly parent was. I could tell that Chiron sensed something wrong when he met the little girl. I could see it in his face. Maybe its the start of the Great Prophecy. Who knows? When I was finally there I sat at the Hermes camp councilor chair by the meeting table waiting. He finally came in a few minutes later in centaur form. I could again see in his face that he was worried about something.

"Any idea about who mystery girl Emmy, dad could be." I asked the centaur from my seat across from him
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" I have an idea but it's not very reassuring," he answered back ", I have a bad feeling about her."

"Why? Do you think its the start of the Great Prophecy?"

"Maybe, but she seems to have a stong scent compared to a child of the Big Three would at her age."

"Do you have a guess on who her godly parent could be?" I asked him again. I could tell he was hiding something from me.

"I have an idea but its far from godly," Chiron said before coming over and whispering something in my ear...

Dun..Dun...DAHHHHHH
What'll happen next?.... Next chapter will be a time skip.

-WFL2B

Notes

Comments

@RecklessDaring
Thanks i will go edit the chaper now!

Definitely off to a good start; I like it! :D
Just a few things I have to point out...you may want to fix your grammatical errors (makes you seem more competent as a writer), and there is actually a place to put your author's notes...you don't have to stick them at the beginning of the chapter. :P

Reckless Daring Reckless Daring
11/23/14