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On the streets

Summary

My name is Leo Valdez. Now the war with Gaea is over, I decided to write the untold part of my story. Starting when I was eight, to when I ended up in the wilderness school, and to the present day.



Characters

Allie Johnson

Allie Johnson

Allie is Leo's best friend, and they met at Leo's first orphanage. They have done everything together, starting when they met.

Leo Valdez

Leo Valdez

Leo has been orphaned since he was eight. Ever since he and his best friend Allie have done everything together

Chapters

Comments

@ivenomeansbywhichtodefend
Thank you for the critique and your right, after not seeing this for a while I realize that this is true. (Sorry I took so long to reply)

Demigod of Olympus Demigod of Olympus
11/9/16

I really really like your story and the way it's going, but I am going to critique a little. You need to slow down a bit. You've got all these ideas jumbled into your head, and you're writing them so fast that a lot of the detail which makes it flow isn't getting in. But I really like the direction this is heading! I'm really excited to read more like bouncing in my seat kind of excited

ivenomeansbywhichtodefend ivenomeansbywhichtodefend
10/2/16

Nice

Constrictor Constrictor
1/23/16

I love it please update

Kat1st Kat1st
11/28/15

This is good as!

Go_chase_a_Donut Go_chase_a_Donut
11/26/15
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