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Reviews and Teddy Bears

Summary

HELLO WONDERFUL PEOPLE AND HAERE MAI!
(Haere mai = welcome!)

Stuck in a rut and don't know how to keep your story going? Need something to cheer you up and give you the motivation to keep blessing the world with the wonderful words you weave? Just in need of a smile and some small encouragement?

Here's the place to be!

I like being happy and positive so I want to spread the love and help other authors (maybe such as yourself) to improve your stories through constructive criticism and positive comments. I won't give your story a rating. I won't bash you for every tiny mistake you make. I just want you to be happy and feel good about your writing.

Sometimes harsh reviews are helpful so if you'd like a harsher review then check out this or this for reviews that are blunt and to the point without being unnecessarily mean.

But that's not what I'm here for. If you need a pick-me-up and want some total and pure positive comments about your story along with a few pointers on how to make it even better then just submit for a review here. I'll try and do as many as I can!

Thanks guys :) I look forward to reading some amazing writing!

-Phoebe :)

Chapters

  1. How It Works

  2. To Do List

    Last updated (8/02/2015)

  3. New Life

    By LexyCooperSeesYou

  4. The Aftermath

    By Grafon

  5. I'm So Sorry

Comments

@Sadie Chase 2
That would be beyond awesome! :) I'll add you to the story now and if you'd also like I can send you an email including all of the tools I've been using. (Also, then I can add you to the form so you can see new entries) :) If you don't wish to then that's fine. I wish you luck!

Phoebe Phoebe
6/18/15

I could take it over if you like! I was thinking I would sstart one of these anyway

Sadie Chase. Sadie Chase.
6/18/15

@FuckYouThunderYouCanSuckMyDick <-------

Sadie Chase. Sadie Chase.
6/18/15

@Torissa Nikole
Okay thanks :)

Phoebe Phoebe
2/8/15