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Honour and sacrifice

The characters

Sorry I didn't quite explain in the last one, but here's a little bit of info about the characters.

#1 Ben
godly parent: Athena
eyes: turquoise
Hair: Black
girlfriend: Phoebe
Strong, fast, smart, excellent fighter, honest, loyal, selfless, kind, brave

#2 Phoebe
Godly parent: Iris
Eyes: hazel
hair: caramel
boyfriend: Ben
Smart, kind, helpful, enthousiastic, ambitious, courageous, loyal, smart

#3 Hugo
Godly parent: Hephaestus
Eyes: Sky Blue
Hair: chocolate brown
girlfriend: Holly
Fire user, funny, excellent fighter, kind, enthousiastic, carefree

#4 Holly
Godly parent: Apollo
Eyes: Forest Green
Hair: Black
boyfriend: Hugo
Beautiful, quiet, friendly, kind, caring, brave, loyal


Notes

Sorry it took me a while to update!
(helpful info in this chapter)

Comments

@Constrictor
Sorry I kinda thought about the "one second knocked out and the next fighting" I doesn't seem so realistic:)

Olympus through time Olympus through time
2/24/15

Nice idea, :) you have a good flow to things. However, I find it confusing how everything plays out. You kept switching point of views and one second Ben was knocked out and the next he was fighting again. It certainly seems exciting, but I just had to recommend that. It's kind of confusing to understand what is happening, so try re-reading it and adding more details. But good job on the story. xD

Constrictor Constrictor
2/24/15

Please write comments or suggestions:)

Olympus through time Olympus through time
2/24/15
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