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The freezing of fire


As Leo and Calypso were flying away from ogygia,Festus reported something in creak & squeak."Oh no." leo said, with alarm evident in his voice.Festus's wing broke off and they began wildly flying downwards.Festus crashed into the waves,catapulting Leo off of Festus's back.Calypso dived after Leo,but it took nearly 3 minutes and Calypso emerges coughing and weezing for air. Festus was waterproof and could swim,luckily,but and they made it back to Camp half blood.Leo had been unconscious the entire ride back to camp,and he never awoke.

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I agree.

Akuma Diavola Akuma Diavola
3/22/15

Try including more emotion.....it's not really sad when the readers don't connec with the characters. Make the chapters longer, too.

Protaokper Protaokper
3/21/15