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A mysterious Demigod

Erin

Erin couldn't wait till school finally got out because she and her best friend Illana would be heading to CHB she couldn't wait to see her friends and siblings. For a summer of fun at CHB full of adventure. But first she had to survive finals. As she was finishing her last test of the day she heard the unmistakable growl of a monster. She quickly turned in her test and asked if she could leave and raced out of the school before the monster could do to much damage. Erin being a daughter of zeus was a monster magnet so she had to learn how to defend herself and is always armed with an arsenal of concealable monster fighting weapons. Her favorite was her hair pin that transformed into a beautiful deadly bow and celestial bronze arrows both blessed by the goddess of the hunt, Artemis. The other weapons were made by her friend Brayden, son of hephaestus god of the forge and metal working. Anyway when I got to the end of the alley I realized the monsters at the end were capable of terrible damage and I couldn't do much to stop it at the end of the alley backed up against the wall was a girl not much younger than me facing down the gorgon could not do it by myself . luckley Illana showed up right at that moment, surveyed the situation and took action while i used my zeus powers to get to higher ground aka i controlled the winds to lift me up off the ground. I think that i scared the poor girl more than the gorgons did and that's saying something. While Illana distracted the gorgons i picked them off from above. When i got back on ground Illana was trying to clean up the mess so i went to see if the girl was okay because she was shaking like nothing else. When i got closer to her i realized that she was shaking from exhaustion. Luckley my house was not too far so while i was carrying her home i asked her what she was doing out on her own and she told me that she had run away when she was from her last foster parents when they decided to send her back to the orphanage. “those monsters called me a demigod, what is a demigod?” the girl asked me.”well it is hard to explain” i said “but i will try to explain it after you get some rest” “okay i will” she said “by the way my name is Inana what's yours?” “my name is Erin and this is my best friend Illana and no monsters will attack you any more” i said she replied “okay” right before she passed out on my bed.

Notes

i need to know what you think and if i should continue this is my first story, thanks rick riordian for the making of CHB. Please tell me what you think so I know to contiue. Please comment

Comments


If you could that would be amazing............. thank you @son_of forgotten God
Raven72836 Raven72836
7/25/15

I love it i well help if u want

@Rainbow Llama
Ok thank u lots for ur input I will work more detail in to the next chapters

Raven72836 Raven72836
7/17/15

I like the story. The guy below is just a guy who leaves bad comments on a lot of people's stories. I think you should continue it. There is nothing wrong with it, but it could use more detail.

Rainbow Llama Rainbow Llama
6/18/15

@Morningstar.
Whats wrong with it

Raven72836 Raven72836
5/22/15