A mysterious Demigod

"Erin who's the girl passed out on your bed says my dad."
"We don't know for sure but she like me Illana i say."
Crash! "what was that i say." The sound of panicking made alert all of a sudden my demigod reflexs kicks in and i run for the kitchen with a sword i keep in my bed room just in case.
I turn the corner ready to face the monster. Just to find Illana on the kitchen counter cowering i fear. "What are u so scared of i ask?" I look on the floor "really a spider that's why you have to break my one direction plate i say." I grab a cup and paper the cover the spider slide paper under it the open the kitchen window and release the spider. I walk back to the girl who is now awake she looks scared still. "Hey like i said earlier your safe now no more monsters will hurt you as long as im around i say." The girl looks at me and says "promise".
I say yes i promise. Illana interrupts us and says "im going to take a shower before we leave to camp-halfblood." she heads off towards the bathroom. "You should take one too so take the upstairs one you look like you haven't taken one in ages. so shoul give me the clothes in your backpack so i can wash them in my magical washer and dryer i say." 20 minutes later after everyone is cleaned up ans packed up we head out the front door and get into CHB van now we are new york bound.

Notes

So it my first chapter in this story tell me what you think.