The Child has risen

in my dream i hear screams and i figure out there Annabeths i run around in black room she yelled my name. whats wrong? i run to her voice still calling out to her and concentrating on her cries full of pain. when i find her she has a sword impaled in her leg it seems to be made of shadow when i go to pull it out my hand goes right through the handle i fall and cry with her as i knew she was to die as i had no way of helping her. who did this i ask in a commanding tone and she points to a dark shadowy figure in the corner i yell and charge at him pulling rip tide out and slash at the man wait no its a female i look forward and the shadow girl is still there unharmed . she makes a sword and swings at me i dodge and she just catches my cheek and it cuts a line from my lip to my ear and it stings like a bitch she knocks me over and goes to stab when i awake with a jolt .

Notes

yeah i got some good advice on my story ans=d told me that i should put in more chapters and slow it down tell me if you agree and please tell me some more advice anyone