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A new Beginning

A new Start

percy's POV


I felt terrible.I didn't want to open my eyes but I heard a heavenly voice Annabeth, I immeadiatly thought.I slowly open my eyes to see her she was bruised almost everywere and had cuts along her face I reached my hand to her face and said "What happened?" "Oh you know you tried to sacrifice yourself for us!!!" she was crying now and I wanted to comfort her but I couldnt muster the strength to sit up.When she saw me struggle though she helped me up and I kissed her so passionately.She pulled away and said "I love you too but promise not to do that again!" and I promised with all my heart "I promise".

Notes

Please tell me what you think.I would love to hear ideas from people!

Comments

Oh lol I did sbac too

Gracie Gibson Gracie Gibson
5/25/16

Make chapters longer?

persaasyandannadeathglare persaasyandannadeathglare
4/25/16

@Constrictor
well this is my first fiction do you want to co author?

XXLilyJacksonXX XXLilyJacksonXX
4/5/16

you should probably get a title image up, along with making longer chapters. that would probably be the best options, but you clearly demonstrate a good writing voice and it seems very cool and I am on the edge of my seat. great job!

Constrictor Constrictor
4/4/16
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