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Finding Love

Claimed

Once I got to the Big House I demanded to speak to Chiron.

"Well where is he!?" I asked Conner.

"He's here just wait, ok?" he replied. Just then out walked or more out wheeled Chiron.

"I want to go HOME!!!" I practically yelled, "This place just isn't for me." I added.

Chiron chuckled, "The thing is Alli, this is the place for you, if you leave you will not be safe. How about after you have had a night to sleep on it, come back and tell me if you still want to leave, Ok?"

I sighed, "Fine, but only one night, ok?"

"Good he said, how Conner go get her ready for capture the flag." He said

"Yess sir." Conner answered as he dragged me out of the big house, and towards some other building.

"Where are we going?" I aksed.

"We need to get you in armour, and find you a weapon." He answered.

"Ok, I want throwing knives." I told him.

He looked at me confused, "Throwing knives??" He said puzzled.

"You know, knives that you throw." I said snottily.

"I know what they are I just didn't take you as a person to use throwing knives. that's all." He said defensively.

"Well my mom taught me, it was her weapon of choice for hunting." I said back

"We will test you for all weapons to see what is the best fit, then you can chose." He said

"Then let's go!" I said as I dragged him into the Armoury building.

First I got fitted for armour, I had it on just incase I impaled myself. The first weapon I tried was a dagger, I was Ok with it but I felt uncomfortable just holding on to it. Next was the bow. Not to shabby I must say, I got 3 out of 7 bullseyes. Next was the sword, I was really good with a sword, but I didn't like it, the sward felt long and akward in my hand. Finally I got the do the throwing knives. I threw bullseye after bullseye, a crowd had formed around me byt the time I was done. My heart was pumping out of my chest, people were staring at me, no they were staring above me. I looked up and there was a bident crossing over a skull.

"Well looks like you've been claimed, by Hades." Conner said after what felt like an eternity. "And looks like he's left you a gift!" I looked at my feet and there it was a box wrapped in black tissue paper, will a peice of paper with my name on it, lying on top.

Notes

I will try to update tommorrow, I leave for camp for two weeks of camp on sunday enjoy, and please vote on what you think. And if anyone want's to co-other just drop your name in the comments.

Comments

@mikciemouse9
The first one is always the scariest yet it'll be your favorite, even if no one else likes it. Don't give up on this even if no one really likes it or people bash it. I ended up deleting my first one and I regret it because it's still one of my favorite things I ever wrote. This site is good for practice.

@Frost Wrathbomber
This is my first fanfiction and I was nervous it was gonna suck really bad. So thanks for letting me know how to make it better.

mikciemouse9 mikciemouse9
6/15/16

One suggestion, would be put more detail into each chapter. The first one went by really fast and it didn't really grab me. If you put more detail into your writing it'll be much better. Good idea though.