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Finding Love

Presents before christmas....

So after I was claimed my "father" Hades (who I was informed was the ruler of the underworld) left me a gift.

The box looked fragile and delicate, almost like it was made of glass. I didn't want to touch it in fear of breaking it.
Then I heard a voice behind me, "You can open it, it wont break."

I wipped my head around to see a scrawny boy dressed in all black with scraggly black hair, holding hands with a boy who looked as bright as the sun, immediately i thought of how maybe opposites really do attract. Instead I said "And who are you?"

The boy in black answered "My name is Nico" he said, then he pointed at the boy who looked like the sun and said "And this is my boyfriend Will. I'm a son of Hades, your brother."

When he said brother i was so taken about that I almost tripped backwards. "BROTHER!!" I said in total surprise. How could I have a brother? Did I even want a brother? Of course I did I've wanted one my whole life, but I was still surprised.

"Yes, your brother" he said with what looked like an almost smirk. "And you also have a sister, but she's currently not here. So are you going to open the gift from our 'father' or not?"

I snapped out of my trance enough to nod my head in reply. With everyone watching me I slowly opened to lid to the box to find a single sheer black throwing knife with the cress of Hades engraved in the handle. "Why only one?" I aksed.

"I don't know" replied Nico, "why don't you give it a try."

With a nod I turned towards the target and trew the knife with all my might. In a split second the knife hit the center of the target with a dull thud. Then before I know what was happening the target disinagrated into a pile of ash, and the knife reaprered in my hand.

Everyone was looking at me with fear and amazement. Then they all started talking to me at once. Throuwing questions at me that I couldn't answer.

Then Chiron gave a loud shout "QUIET!!" And all at once everyone stopped talking. "It is time for capture the flag, get with your teams and suit up!" he said. "Alli you will be on the blue team with Nico, Percy, Annabeth, and the other new camper Troy, who has yet to be claimed."

"LET THE GAME BEGIN!!" He gave with a loud shout.

Notes

Comments

@mikciemouse9
The first one is always the scariest yet it'll be your favorite, even if no one else likes it. Don't give up on this even if no one really likes it or people bash it. I ended up deleting my first one and I regret it because it's still one of my favorite things I ever wrote. This site is good for practice.

@Frost Wrathbomber
This is my first fanfiction and I was nervous it was gonna suck really bad. So thanks for letting me know how to make it better.

mikciemouse9 mikciemouse9
6/15/16

One suggestion, would be put more detail into each chapter. The first one went by really fast and it didn't really grab me. If you put more detail into your writing it'll be much better. Good idea though.