Wise Girl
Chapter One Part One
A/N Hello everyone. I had finals, so I haven't been able to update for a while. This is kind of a modified version of Chapter 51 of The Blood of Olympus, so I guess everything belongs to Rick Riordan? As always, Review down below.
5/30/17: Screw it, I'm just going to publish what I have. I don't want to keep you guys waiting! Don't worry, I'll finish the rest of the chapter…
Everything going was fine, until Annabeth got stabbed.
The battle raged all around the demigods. Annabeth quickly surveyed the scene. Unfortunately for the demigods, they were heavily outnumbered, and Octavian's auxiliary forces had brought had turned to Gaea.
Annabeth shuddered, feeling the déjà vu wash over her like a wave. She couldn't help thinking back, years back. The last time this happened, she had been stabbed with a poisoned knife, saving her boyfriend's life in the process... A hellhound suddenly leaped at her, snarling viciously. Annabeth quickly whipped out her trusty celestial bronze knife and slit its throat without batting an eye. The hellhound disintegrated into dust. This is too easy. She thought to herself, sadly.
The demigods were divided into two groups. The main body rallied around the Athena Parthenos, atop Half-Blood Hill, contained the bulk of Camp Half-Blood, along with the First and Fifth Cohorts of the Twelfth Legion. The other three cohorts were located some distance away, taking the brunt of the attack. Unfortunately for Annabeth, that was also where she was.
"Greeks!" roared a voice to her immediate right.
"Let's, um, fight stuff!"
Percy
There he stood, as strong as ever. Sea-green eyes, tall frame, broad shoulders. He had never looked so magnificently beautiful. Percy had gained a couple of relatively minor cuts and bruises like everyone else had, but he had hardly noticed them.
Annabeth had had a crush on him since they were twelve.
She could still remember the day when he half-dragged himself onto the porch of the Big House and promptly collapsed. He had been dirty, and his clothes were torn up and cut from combat. He had killed the Minotaur, on his first day in camp, without an actual weapon. Many of the campers were jealous. Many of them had been waiting for years for a stupid quest, but this little newbie ends up slaying the fucking Minotaur, one of the most fearsome monsters in all of Greek Mythology.
But for Annabeth, it was love at first sight.
She had been watching him sleep, like the creepy stalker she was, when he suddenly woke.
"You drool when you sleep" she had said.
She had wanted to slap herself
The two of them started dating soon after the Battle of Manhattan.
Aphrodite had called them her favorite couple, and then ran off, screaming something about "Percabeth." Ugh.
Then Hera just had to whisk him away to that wretched Roman camp, erasing all of his memories, too.
Which gave Annabeth another reason to despise her.
Now they were back together again, surviving a fall into Hell itself.
She had thought the Underworld was bad.
Percy had talked about his dreams for the future.
College in New Rome.
Starting a family.
(A/N Ok, my first fight scene. *deep breath* *deep breath*)
Annabeth was shaken out of her thoughts by a hideous yell. She glanced up, just in time to see an empousa charge at her, screaming bloody murder, curved sword raised high above her head. Annabeth drew her bone sword just as the empousa brought her weapon down in an arc of bronze. Annabeth expertly parried the empousa's slash and stabbed her in the abdomen with her bronze knife in one fluid action. These monsters have no battle strategy whatsoever she thought to herself, grimacing. Her hubris was really getting in the way.
The monster dissolved into glitter and blew away in the warm breeze.
A shout went up through the crowd as the two groups of demigods, annihilating everything in their path, merged into one.
A/N Okay readers, how was it? Hopefully, Annabeth wasn't too OOC. Keep in mind that this is still my first fanfiction... Review down below, tell me what you think. PLEASE BE HONEST. +300 reads as of 6/9/17, that is absolutely amazing! Nobody is reading it on Wattpad, though. I’m crying inside…
Take care.
Written from 5/24/17 through 5/30/17
5/30/17: Screw it, I'm just going to publish what I have. I don't want to keep you guys waiting! Don't worry, I'll finish the rest of the chapter…
Everything going was fine, until Annabeth got stabbed.
The battle raged all around the demigods. Annabeth quickly surveyed the scene. Unfortunately for the demigods, they were heavily outnumbered, and Octavian's auxiliary forces had brought had turned to Gaea.
Annabeth shuddered, feeling the déjà vu wash over her like a wave. She couldn't help thinking back, years back. The last time this happened, she had been stabbed with a poisoned knife, saving her boyfriend's life in the process... A hellhound suddenly leaped at her, snarling viciously. Annabeth quickly whipped out her trusty celestial bronze knife and slit its throat without batting an eye. The hellhound disintegrated into dust. This is too easy. She thought to herself, sadly.
The demigods were divided into two groups. The main body rallied around the Athena Parthenos, atop Half-Blood Hill, contained the bulk of Camp Half-Blood, along with the First and Fifth Cohorts of the Twelfth Legion. The other three cohorts were located some distance away, taking the brunt of the attack. Unfortunately for Annabeth, that was also where she was.
"Greeks!" roared a voice to her immediate right.
"Let's, um, fight stuff!"
Percy
There he stood, as strong as ever. Sea-green eyes, tall frame, broad shoulders. He had never looked so magnificently beautiful. Percy had gained a couple of relatively minor cuts and bruises like everyone else had, but he had hardly noticed them.
Annabeth had had a crush on him since they were twelve.
She could still remember the day when he half-dragged himself onto the porch of the Big House and promptly collapsed. He had been dirty, and his clothes were torn up and cut from combat. He had killed the Minotaur, on his first day in camp, without an actual weapon. Many of the campers were jealous. Many of them had been waiting for years for a stupid quest, but this little newbie ends up slaying the fucking Minotaur, one of the most fearsome monsters in all of Greek Mythology.
But for Annabeth, it was love at first sight.
She had been watching him sleep, like the creepy stalker she was, when he suddenly woke.
"You drool when you sleep" she had said.
She had wanted to slap herself
The two of them started dating soon after the Battle of Manhattan.
Aphrodite had called them her favorite couple, and then ran off, screaming something about "Percabeth." Ugh.
Then Hera just had to whisk him away to that wretched Roman camp, erasing all of his memories, too.
Which gave Annabeth another reason to despise her.
Now they were back together again, surviving a fall into Hell itself.
She had thought the Underworld was bad.
Percy had talked about his dreams for the future.
College in New Rome.
Starting a family.
(A/N Ok, my first fight scene. *deep breath* *deep breath*)
Annabeth was shaken out of her thoughts by a hideous yell. She glanced up, just in time to see an empousa charge at her, screaming bloody murder, curved sword raised high above her head. Annabeth drew her bone sword just as the empousa brought her weapon down in an arc of bronze. Annabeth expertly parried the empousa's slash and stabbed her in the abdomen with her bronze knife in one fluid action. These monsters have no battle strategy whatsoever she thought to herself, grimacing. Her hubris was really getting in the way.
The monster dissolved into glitter and blew away in the warm breeze.
A shout went up through the crowd as the two groups of demigods, annihilating everything in their path, merged into one.
A/N Okay readers, how was it? Hopefully, Annabeth wasn't too OOC. Keep in mind that this is still my first fanfiction... Review down below, tell me what you think. PLEASE BE HONEST. +300 reads as of 6/9/17, that is absolutely amazing! Nobody is reading it on Wattpad, though. I’m crying inside…
Take care.
Written from 5/24/17 through 5/30/17
not bad
11/23/19