One Heart Dies, Another Breaks Rewrite
Summary
Hello everyone. eding420 here, and I'm actually thinking that instead of writing new stories, and having to come up with the ideas, I could focus of "remixing" existing fanfics. I would take the story, and and rewrite it. I consider myself a decent writer (what do you think?), but I am ABSOLUTELY HORRIBLE at coming up with ideas. I guess that is what attracted me to the world of fanfiction.net. This is my first shot at that. Tell me if I should continue doing this. The plot is owned by Goddess of Night Eternal Faith, the characters by Rick Riordan.
Enjoy!
Original Summary:
Piper has had enough of Jason, after she catches him cheating on her; she decides to run away or so they think what they don't know is that Piper is doing something that she herself never thought of doing... something that can ruin her life and the lives of those she cares about.
My Summary
Piper's world is forever altered when she catches Jason, Jason of all people, cheating on her. Heart shattered, she decides to run... or so they think. She had never thought that anyone, especially her, could be so utterly broken, inside and out. With nowhere to turn to, Piper finds herself doing something she had never thought was possible, an act that has the ability to turn her world - and the world of those around her - upside down.
My Original Summary
This is simply a rewrite of One Heart dies Another Breaks by Goddess of Night Eternal Faith. Now, before you guys get all over me, let me point out that I PM'd her, and got her permission. I will not directly plagiarize, but I will use the general structure of her chapters. Think about it as being a translation of her work into my writing style. I will also fix any grammar errors.
Which one did you like better? Let me know in a review.
Enjoy!
Original Summary:
Piper has had enough of Jason, after she catches him cheating on her; she decides to run away or so they think what they don't know is that Piper is doing something that she herself never thought of doing... something that can ruin her life and the lives of those she cares about.
My Summary
Piper's world is forever altered when she catches Jason, Jason of all people, cheating on her. Heart shattered, she decides to run... or so they think. She had never thought that anyone, especially her, could be so utterly broken, inside and out. With nowhere to turn to, Piper finds herself doing something she had never thought was possible, an act that has the ability to turn her world - and the world of those around her - upside down.
My Original Summary
This is simply a rewrite of One Heart dies Another Breaks by Goddess of Night Eternal Faith. Now, before you guys get all over me, let me point out that I PM'd her, and got her permission. I will not directly plagiarize, but I will use the general structure of her chapters. Think about it as being a translation of her work into my writing style. I will also fix any grammar errors.
Which one did you like better? Let me know in a review.
