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In One Minute

Could he have been saved?

Percy stares around at the hills. His world is spinning and his head is pounding. Next to him Nico stands there, blood pouring from his head. He is as white as chalk and Percy can hear him struggling to breathe. He doesn't know what to do so he stands there hesitantly. Nico suddenly collapses and Percy rushes to his side. He looks around and starts fumbling in his bag for things that could help. Nico looks at him. When percy pulls out nothing he can see Nico's face drop. Nico is in so much pain and he can see it in his eyes. Percy stares and him and then looks at the sky begging the gods to do anything they can but nothing happens. When percy look back at Nico his eyes are wide open and he isn't breathing. Percy stares at him and he starts to cry and he can only think one thing.

Could he have been saved

Notes

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~Eden

Comments

I can tell this is a fanfic I could get into good job keep up the good work :)

Lol...

sweetprim10 sweetprim10
12/9/17

Thank you for responding. You're literally the first active person I've met on this site.

Could you please check out my stories, and give me some feedback?

@eden_delos

eding420 eding420
9/10/17

@eding420
Thank you for the feedback, but just putting it out there all of these are going to be short as and there will be more just wait!

eden_delos eden_delos
9/8/17

This is way, way too short.

Also, please, the capitalization.

Put more passion into your writing.

Less awkward.

eding420 eding420
9/8/17