Seeking Happiness - Comments, page 25

@Swear on the River Styx
Believe me, I'll keep reading. I didn't know about this site until I saw a link to your fic on Tumblr two nights ago.

@in demigodishness and all that
Thank you do much ! I love your feedback ! Im just so thrilled that you like it ! Please keep reading and don't hesitate to give me and criticism :)

Just read the third chapter and really liked it. You're a really good writer and the characters were themselves. I really do think that Piper would want to wait a little bit longer to have sex, so it's so nice to see someone who knows that Piper would want to test the waters before diving in. I'm on the lookout for more stories/chapters.

You should write more.

I love it! I saw a link to it on tumblr and I really liked it. It made me laugh, it made me cry, it made me get all fluffy, and it made me excited because of the sexy scene. It's not often that one comes across a fic like this.
Just a bit of advice. You should really break up some of the text. You have really long paragraphs that could really be broken up. Especially when people are talking. It is just a bit neater.
All in all this was a great story. I feel like you really captured their characters really well. I'll be on the look out for more stories by you! :)