Demeter's Destiny - Comments

Omg!! This is the first decent story about a dauther/son o Demeter I read!!! Mom muat be prou of you ;P
Please, when you gonna update a new chapter???

@DivergentDemigod28

AW! Thanks so much! I didn't think anyone was actually reading it, so I kinda got back into reading. I'll start back up again right away!

Not to rush but when is the update? I luv the story

Much better :D

@theteenagefandom

Thanks. I was trying to figure out how to make that work. I think the new chapter is a lot easier to read.

I like your character pictures! They're awesomeee.
I would add in a hard return after each dialogue sentence. It's easier to read that way ;)

@Homer



Thanks so much! And that's an awesome idea I'll see what I can do.

@DemetersDaughter


That part with the hair styling? Total *FEELS* moment right there. :D
And I think it's cool that you decided to use a Naiad/Dryad (Whichever one) instead of a Satyr.
And maybe you could make her into an awesome climber, because of vines and branches and stuff, like a Tarzane or something, lol.

Hey guys please please please tell me what you think!