The Son of Artemis - Comments

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@Magmashroom
Thank you! I really love percy Jackson and when I discovered this site you can imagine my excitement!

This really kind of seems like the actual series did any one else notice

*Woot woot!* And Darren has a little cameo in my story as well. If you're interested in reading my story, click this! https://www.percyjacksonfanfiction.com/Story/60293/The-Daughter-of-Hera/

And that ending tho! :O

With every chapter now in POVs, could you title them before you start their story? Because when reading each chapter I honestly can't tell who's talking... :/

Umm not trying sound mean but empousia is a vampire with fire hair, mist matched legs which one is mechanical bronze and the other is a donkey leg, they arent half snale

I like it! :) If you ever need help with cover art or spell checking then just let me know! Or honestly if you need any help with absolutely anything! :)

@The Bright One
Thanks! I'll try a little harder. I'm 12 years old and I'm gifted in English. But I'll try!!

@The Bright One
Thanks! I'll try a little harder. I'm 12 years old and I'm gifted in English. But I'll try!!

@The Bright One
Thanks! I'll try a little harder. I'm 12 years old and I'm gifted in English. But I'll try!!

I really like this idea and it's pretty well written! :D Maybe just consider putting in some paragraphs after each new idea and everytime a new person is speaking to help it flow a little better for the reader? Otherwise it's really good so far!
Keep writing! :D

@Striderbro
yeah it was good (Only read like 1 chapter though)

@percysbluefood
You...read my story?

@Striderbro
Thanks! I just posted chapter two so I hope you like it. There's not much action in chapter two but I will post chapter three right now! Be sure to recommend my story to other people. And I love your Blood of Titans story!!

@percysbluefood
Ok. I'm gonna trust you on this. It better be good. Lol

@Striderbro
I did it on purpose. Artemis wanted a special son. A secret son and you'll figure it out more into the sto

I like it. I really like the way you write too. Keep going.

Empousai aren't half women, half snake. You're thinking of dracnae.

Ok so I'm gonna be honest here...it's good and all, don't get me wrong it's just...well this has been done before and none of them ever last because they're never good because Artimis is supposed to be a MAIDEN goddess. It's good, but it's been done before.

@Fangirltodamax
Thank you! I'm new on here and it took me a while to figure everything out but I'm a major percy Jackson and heroes of Olympus fan!