Mortals and Demigods - Comments

Inspiring chapter(ch 4)

pls update

Please update

Please update I love it

that happened to me once or twice

PLEASE UPDATE!!! It's been like forever!!!

PLEASE UPDATE!!! It's been like forever!!!

PLEASE UPDATE!!! It's been like forever!!!

PLEASE UPDATE!!! It's been like forever!!!

Thank you for changing it back to MORTALS and demigods. Recently it has just been demigod recruiting.

I've been commenting a lot but it's only because I love this story so PLEASE UPDATE!!!

@Persassy1011
Don't worry, there will be at least one more part.

Aw I wish you could write more!!!

@Persassy1011
just did! another short one :0

Update I want to know what happens in Nathan Richards!!!

YASSS KUROKO'S BASKETBALL IS LIFEEE!!! #CrunchyRollForever

Way better than mine, lol. Keep up the good work!!

@Stop it Rick
Ok, I'm just glad you didn't take it the wrong way! I still ♡ the story!

@Persassy1011
Thanks! And we'll work on that, it's great to get [constructive] criticism! I'm working on a new chapter now.

Can you guys get back to the whole mortals meet the seven again? I feel like this is turning into more of a "mortals figure out they're demigods" story. I liked the earlier chapters better. When you do, there should be a chapter about when the mortals meet Frank and Hazel. Still love the story, I voted 10.