Fanfiction Reviews

I love this one! I recommend the story, and the author.

No language, at all, period. No blood or gore, period. So far.

I would suggest making Octavian, more, well, Octavian. Make him more aggressive in his friendship with Kerri. I think he should be a little more mean. That's the only thing lacking for me. But, I can see where your going with this. Keep going!

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