Fanfiction Reviews
The New Half-Bloods of the Generation
This story has a nice plot, only two chapters so far, but a good start! I can't wait to review this one again when the author has written more.
Just a few grammar errors, could use some spacing I between paragraphs, a few misspelled words, but other than that, pretty good!
Its rated PG-13 for, I don't know. There's no cussing so far, but like I said, there's only two chapters. It may be for violence later in the story.
Thanks for reading!
Frost
@theguyfromcabin6
I'll see what I can do for you.
7/30/14