Fanfiction Reviews
The Seven's Six
I think the author has a good idea, and a great story line, but has trouble putting it out on paper, or in this instance, typing it out.
The first five chapters are about the six kids, and it kinda felt like it was rushed, but also slow. It's confusing I know. I think that with a little editing, help, and experience, we'll have a great story!
Just keep in mind that no one is perfect, and writing takes time, and lots of practice. The more you write, the better you'll get! So my advice is keep writing, and trying your hardest, no matter what anyone else says, and you'll have a awesome story!
Notes
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7/30/14