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Erica Fennel

Name: Erica Fennel

Age at Beginning: 16

Godly Parent: Hades

Bio: Erica is a depressed girl. It is sophomore year at Goode High School and she is the odd girl out. She has never felt the same as anyone else and has seen some pretty crazy things that she usually keeps to herself. Her only friend is an upbeat French-Exchange Student. her friend(Nameless for now) is very strange and only ever hangs out around Erica. She(if you havent already figured it out) is Erica's Satyr Protector. she comes across a strange boy that wants to take her back to some place called camp Halfblood. this boy is Percy Jackson.

A little more about Her: She has long black hair that she lets flow in front of her face. she usually wears black like a emo person. She lives with her mother that loves her, but she is very strict with her. her mother is always telling her what to doand never lets her do anything that she doesnt know everything about. Erica will eventually find out that this is because her mother knows that she is a Demigod.... but does not know who the father is.

Notes

Hey, Just want to let you guys know that i am going to pretty busy with studying for my EOCs, so i will most likely not be getting on as often, probably not until they are over, but hey have faith, i might find some freetime in between studying and baseball!

Comments

I'm the writer and I am completely open to any ideas that might help

Son_of_Apollo99
5/30/14

@ChildOfNike

I think she might have left that up to the writer. but i don't know.

MazeRunnerGirl
5/30/14

That was rather helpful, thanks i'll add more info when i update

Son_of_Apollo99
5/29/14

This isn't bad, but I'd suggest you to make the characters' backstories a bit deeper and add some more details to their personalities. That would give the readers a better view of what kind of people the characters really are. What I mean is adding things like favourite color, gratest fear, favourite ways of spending time, etc.

I hope I was any help :D

ChildOfNike
5/29/14

ok free to opinion, any suggestions to what i do to make it better?

Son_of_Apollo99
5/29/14