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Madison Jacobson

Name Madison Jacobson AKA Maddie

Age at Beginning: 13

Godly Parent: Hecate

About Her: Maddie has a slim figure and black hair that comes to a little lower than he shoulder blades. She usually wears just logo t shirts and jeans. and never leaves her cabin without her ran down, gray sneakers. she is usually in an upbeat mode, but gets a little depressed when the subject of death comes up.


Back-story: Maddie lived with her father until she was 10 years old when two 20 year old people in orange shirts. They were Percy and Annabeth. they talked to her father and he let her get taken to camp on one condition. That she writes to him every week while she is there to always have an update on her life. This becomes important to her and at the end of every week she leaves whatever she is doing to go to her cabin to send her father her letter.(I'll go into this more later). When she was living with her father, she loved him very much and did a lot in her life with him. whenever she went anywhere other than New York(where she lives with her dad in a manhattan Apartment) she would always take him with her. he was by her side with all of her best experiences.


Story: Maddie is living at camp and sending letters to and from her father. when she is 13 she sends a letter to her father and does not get one back. she puts it off until next week when she sends him another letter and he still does not reply. She begs Chiron to let her check her fathers house to see if he is ok. he evetnually lets him go, as long as she takes two of her friends to keep eachother safe, in case something goes wrong. she decides to take Natalie and Griffon, her two closest camp friends. Natalie is one of her step-sisters in the Hecate cabin but is for some reason not very good at doing magic and bending the mist. she is an amazing artist and is always drawing whenever she gets free time. Griffon is a son of Hermes and is a Knife Specialist. he is the best fighter in his cabin and cannot be beaten by anyone. he has had a crush on Natalie for the longest time but refuses to admit his feelings because of his fear that she will reject him. what he doesnt know is the Natalie has had a similar crush on him, but is much more hidden with her feelings, keeping them in her drawing notebook that she never lets anyone touch.but they aint important right now. When they get to Maddie's Father's Apartment, they find it in shambles. destroyed furniture, ripped up walls, and nothing to showe for it exept for a note that says that someone had captured her father and she will get him back if she goes to Thalia's tree and burns it down making the camp vulnerable. Now she has to go on a quest to find her father, or betray her beloved camp in exchange for her father. what will she do? You Decide!!

Notes

Comments

I'm the writer and I am completely open to any ideas that might help

Son_of_Apollo99
5/30/14

@ChildOfNike

I think she might have left that up to the writer. but i don't know.

MazeRunnerGirl
5/30/14

That was rather helpful, thanks i'll add more info when i update

Son_of_Apollo99
5/29/14

This isn't bad, but I'd suggest you to make the characters' backstories a bit deeper and add some more details to their personalities. That would give the readers a better view of what kind of people the characters really are. What I mean is adding things like favourite color, gratest fear, favourite ways of spending time, etc.

I hope I was any help :D

ChildOfNike
5/29/14

ok free to opinion, any suggestions to what i do to make it better?

Son_of_Apollo99
5/29/14