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Trent Turner

Name: Trent Turner

Godly Parent: Zeus

Age at beginning: 12

About Him: his story starts a few years after the Giant War. He as Blonde hair that's almost white. a clean face that seems almost to perfect.(think about Jace from the Mortal Instruments and you have got a pretty good idea of what he's like). He comes to camp half-blood after living in new jersey with his mother. he had the regular childhood life with a few friends he grew up with. though he trusted his mortal friends, he never told them about the night that he saw a large man that looked suspiciously like Bigfoot in his searching for something, he also told no one how lightning came down and struck the large man as he was going closer to the house. he ran outside to see nobody around and sand flowing out of his backyard. He is found at his middle school by a 16 year old girl in camo clothing. Her name is Thalia and she tells him to come with her to a place called Camp-Half Blood. Trent trusts her but they first stop at his mothers suburban house to get his things, but when his mother sees Thalia, she freaks out and won't let her take her son away from his home. they both find out that the house was enchanted by Zeus to not let any monsters near it, but Thalia isn't one to take no for an answer and calls backup from a few other campers to get her to understand about Camp. when she still refuses, they leave but Trent leaves that night with a a bag and meets with Thalia to take him to Camp.

Story: .......Whoops, just read the about him.

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Comments

I'm the writer and I am completely open to any ideas that might help

Son_of_Apollo99
5/30/14

@ChildOfNike

I think she might have left that up to the writer. but i don't know.

MazeRunnerGirl
5/30/14

That was rather helpful, thanks i'll add more info when i update

Son_of_Apollo99
5/29/14

This isn't bad, but I'd suggest you to make the characters' backstories a bit deeper and add some more details to their personalities. That would give the readers a better view of what kind of people the characters really are. What I mean is adding things like favourite color, gratest fear, favourite ways of spending time, etc.

I hope I was any help :D

ChildOfNike
5/29/14

ok free to opinion, any suggestions to what i do to make it better?

Son_of_Apollo99
5/29/14