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Hey Guys, thanks for reading my stuff and thanks for being patient with me, I finally got through the EOGs and Aced my Algebra EOC. so WOOOO HOOOOO. anyway summer is starting so i'll probably have more time to update, or maybe not, depends on whether or not my friends are dragging me out to do things with them. sooooo yeah, Thanks for reading BYE
This isn't bad, but I'd suggest you to make the characters' backstories a bit deeper and add some more details to their personalities. That would give the readers a better view of what kind of people the characters really are. What I mean is adding things like favourite color, gratest fear, favourite ways of spending time, etc.
I hope I was any help :D
I'm the writer and I am completely open to any ideas that might help
5/30/14