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Seeking Happiness - Comments, page 6
OMG! So good. You really do need to work on updating quicker though. I get writer's block and building up suspense, but with an online fan fiction, you can't leave your readers hanging for too long, especially when you have had almost 1 million views. Don't rush, but at the same time don't spend more than maybe ten days to update. Also, make your updates consistent. Its ok to miss out on an update every once in a while, but not too often, like with a tv show. You count on it to be on the same day, same time, and same station every single week, with the occasional break in between. I'm not trying to offend you in any way, just some constructive criticism.
simply amazing, take your time to write the story, dont hurry, i just want a great ending, or a neverending story
Okay... I just read the first chapter. Yes, at 3:20 in the morning and it's really good and what's funny is none of this would really happen but it's amazing. I mean, you have over half a million views!!! So great job
Are trying to kill us with anticipation?! I mean the story is awesome but you update like once a month . PLEASE. UPDATE SOONER!!!!!
Niiiiice. Also, I'm kind of glad you didn't go too into detail with the sex. ;) very cute chapter indeed. I understand how stressful it must be, being the most popular story on here. Very good job. XD. Can't wait for more.
I loved your story! It was good. You should update more but I understand that you need that time for editing and other stuff to make it your best. I also agree with the person below me. they have a point, you shouldn't take more than like 10-12 days. I still love it either way! YOU SHOULD BE AN AUTHOR!
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