Elysium - Comments

Wow this is good keep going

Wow this is good keep going

That was amazing! You have some serious talent!!

that was amazing :)

Omg Im dying that was so good

I really liked the story. Silena and Beckendorf, nice romance. I like how you put it in third person allowing the reader to see both sides rather than just Beckendorf's or Silena's. Its sad how the ending turned out though. Interesting though. Would you ever think about making a story for her reincarnation?

OOHMAGOOSH!! No wonder why you couldn't put anything in the summary and it is true that giving this story a description would be silly. Because it would've spoiled it. Hey... can you continue it? It was so sad... I don't like cliffhangers in the first place... But you don't have to.

*sniff* That was BEAUTIFUL!!!!!! *sniff sniff*