The First Daughter - Comments

@WritingDreams
Glad to hear that! I am writing the squeal now and if you click my profile you will find other stories I author in...

@Eliza Rush
I know what you mean. All the characters in my book usually have something of me in them.

@Blackjack Tempest
Kinda but not really... In all honesty all the character have a little bit of me in them...

Did you base Eliza on yourself?

Really well written! I truly appreciated the whole storyline, with its well-development characters and adventurous plot. I would love to read some more.

@Frost Wrathbomber
Because I am troll author

Yes. YES. YEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And, How could you let Lily die?!

@Frost Wrathbomber
When I finish the proluge

@Frost Wrathbomber
When I finish the prologue

@Eliza Rush

ELIZA. WHAT?! WHEN'S THEN NEXT BOOK?!?!?!?!?!

@Marie na

I just finished re-reading it lol that and I was using my imagination on what it's like to grieve

okay, first... This is beautifulLLY NOT OKAY
the way you write is amazing and you somehow made me remember the hungergames and then I just felt bad over everything...so, thank you ;_;

@Marie na
I'm sooo sorry!!!
NOT!

DAMMIT ELIZA I TRUSTED YOU! How could you do this to me? ;_;
(congrats on the veiw and subs btw :D)
But still.....why? *Hides in the corner sobbing uncontrolably*

@Frost Wrathbomber
Maybe... 0.0

@Eliza Rush

Eliza, DID YOU JUST KILL LILLY?!

@Marie na
I'm hurring as fast as possible lol! XD

thanks for updating so quickly but yoU CANNOT STOP THERE I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT HELP
Anyway, this is reaaaaallly great fanfic *thumbs up*

@Utterly dysfunctional
Thank You! I've worked hard to not make her a Mary Sue! XD

Aww man this fanfic is good! I like how she's freaking out over it all and not a Mary Sue in the slightest. You don't know how many times I have read a fanfic on this site and the OC has been a Mary Sue -_-. It's so nice to have something fresh!