How I Became A Demigod - Comments

@daughter_of_Artemis
Thank you so much! The next chapter promises to be exciting!!!!

I like it *as I am hitting subscribe*

This is my very first story, cut me some slack.

Dude, it's confusing. Like the title says How I Became A Demigod, but it's about this Zeus kid who has anger issues. Give it more detail. Like, what happened to her mom, and why Percy likes her. It confused me but I like the cliffhanger.
. PERCY OUT :)

Idk this just really doesn't make any sense..

@Rainflight
It's okay! You didn't, so don't worry.

@zueschild12340
sorry if I insulted you, but you did a pretty good job! :)

@Rainflight
I was trying to put a little twist. There will be a surprise for Pearcabeth lovers in the story later on

@theteenagefandom
To answer the fight question, it started with Alexis then Annabeth then Alexis then Annabeth and so on. Sorry for the confusion. I'll answer the rest of your questions in the characters list.

PRETTY COOL! It's just..i'm a little confused,though. But its interesting! (plus,I want annabeth and Percy together).
Don't get discouraged! ,your doing great!!! keep on writing!

It's really...rushed, which is what's confusing me, like you just threw about five chapters worth of information at me in two paragraphs.

Maybe if you explained it a bit more, it's be easier to understand.

I think you've actually got a good plot, but just expand on your ideas a little more, like why she had a crush on Percy, why didn't she just let it go, why did she try to fry Annabeth, are people afraid of her, why was she suspected to be the daughter of Zeus...?

Plus, the dialogue is difficult to understand, like, I don't know who's speaking when you have Alexis and Annabeth fighting against each other in chapter two.

Hey, keep it up! Don't get discouraged! (I WANT TO READ MORE SO DON'T STOP!!!) .

This'll be very interesting to read, once it's easier to understand.

@D.O.S.
With what

I'm just a little confused xD

@D.O.S.
What do you not like

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